Problem: As much as 60% of visitors close your site if their attention wasn't instantly grabbed and kept. Solution: A website intro that successfully hooks within 5 seconds, making visitors stay and actually pay attention to your offer.
No obligations
Done in 24h
Human work (no AI)
Before
Before
- Generic messaging
- Poor value proposition
- Slightly ambiguous call-to-action
After
After
- Specific messaging intertwined with value and differentiation
- Clear, strong value proposition
- Straightforward, detailed call-to-action
Before
Before
- Generic, mission-statement-like messaging
- Unclear product specification
- Vague value proposition
- Spread too thin with two calls-to-action
After
After
- Simple, obvious messaging
- Clear product specification through words and visual
- Obvious value proposition, backed by social proof
- One main call-to-action that addresses key question (release date).
Before
Before
- Product/service not clear (concern: do I have to migrate all my tools?)
- Mediocre value proposition and lack of proof
- Vague, non-enticing call-to-action
- Visual is ok, but it could provide more context.
After
After
- Audience callout, clear service
- Clear and convincing value proposition with quantified social proof
- Simple, straightforward call-to-action
- Tweaked visual to provide context around what the service is about
Before
Before
- Product/features not instantly clear
- Ambiguity because of multiple calls-to-action
- Mediocre social proof
- Interactive visual has mediocre UX and doesn’t clarify the product instantly
After
After
- More straightforward messaging
- A single, informative call-to-action that entices through openness
- Abundant social proof that leaves no room for doubt
- Visual replaced by a low-barrier demo video with ultra-clear thumbnail
Before
Before
- Abstract, unclear messaging
- Inappropriate scarcity in call-to-action
- Main concern (security) poorly addressed
After
After
- Concrete, clear messaging through simple words and visuals
- Appropriate urgency in call-to-action
- Main concern (security) clearly addressed
Hi there, I'm Steven. I’m running this promotion to build my presence as a freelancer. You literally can't lose, but you might just win big - so why not give it a shot?
What you'll get:
Figma
Mockup
- Desktop + Mobile
- Ready to be developed
- Matching your brand
Launch bonus
PDF
- Shows all changes
- Explains all changes
- Implementation guide
How it works:
1. Submit the form
2. Reply to my email
3. Get your mockup
I'll make your hero section hook (in 24 hours for FREE)
Hi there, I'm Steven and I'm serious about over-delivering. I’m running this promotion to establish myself as a freelancer and earn amazing reviews. Thats right, earn. Totally risk free - so why settle for anything less than a hero section that hooks?
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Feel free to send reach out using the contact form, or via steven@heroesthathook.com.